[ntpsec commit] More text polishing.

Eric S. Raymond esr at ntpsec.org
Wed Oct 21 18:50:01 UTC 2015


Module:    ntpsec
Branch:    master
Commit:    0f19e26e58d2c35015713e3ee66b123e7e621993
Changeset: http://git.ntpsec.org/ntpsec/commit/?id=0f19e26e58d2c35015713e3ee66b123e7e621993

Author:    Eric S. Raymond <esr at thyrsus.com>
Date:      Wed Oct 21 14:49:36 2015 -0400

More text polishing.

---

 docs/index.txt | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/index.txt b/docs/index.txt
index 02e7c31..1030e04 100644
--- a/docs/index.txt
+++ b/docs/index.txt
@@ -54,13 +54,14 @@ LANs and up to a few tens of milliseconds on WANs. Typical NTP
 configurations utilize multiple redundant servers and diverse network
 paths in order to achieve high accuracy and reliability.
 
-For background on the problem NTP solves, see
+For background on the problems NTP solves, see
 link:http://www.catb.org/gpsd/time-service-intro.html[Introduction to
 Time Service].  This white paper discusses time source types, relative
 accuracy, relative cost, and how those figures of merit have changed
 in recent decades
 
-The link:ntpspeak.html[Glossary of NTP-speak] might also be helpful. 
+The link:ntpspeak.html[Glossary of NTP-speak] might also be a helpful
+guide for the perplexed.
 
 [[differences]]
 == Differences from NTP Classic ==



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